Recognitions

“We appreciate that you offered us the opportunity to read your work.”

“We did find much to be admired about each story.”

About Dangerous People:
“There’s an incredible level of atmosphere here.”
“The snobby prep school kids are drawn interestingly.”

About A Conspiracy of Fate:
“There’s much to appreciate in this story of young love and loss.”
“I especially admire John’s unique voice as a character; he seems like a poor lost soul out of time.”

About The Modern Mondego:
“I love this story’s energetic prose.”
“The strong work with detail and diction evoke the narrator’s intriguing, off-beat persona and worldview.”

“Big congratulations again on placing in the 2025 Unpublished season!”

“We’re incredibly grateful the field turned out the way it did—you’re all marvelous storytellers.”

“A Conspiracy of Fate… selected as the lone runner-up!”

“What really sold us on it was your writing overall.”

“Once you get into the story, it’s super immersive.”

“Lodestar… also came close for the Literary category, top 8 or so.”

“We thought the writing was far above average. Nicely done!”

“Someone to Watch Over Me’ contains the strong promise of a solid psychological thriller.”

“I kept reading because of the well-written chilling voice of the unreliable first-person narration.”

“We appreciate the talent and skill that goes into every manuscript sent our way.”

“I was immediately drawn in by the propulsive rhythm and confident voice of ‘Thinking Reeds’.”

“The story is addictive without relying solely on plot.”

“You get a strong portrait of the central character, Bram Forrester.”

“Good characterizing dialogue differentiation.”

“The schizoid voices are clearly integrated and easy to follow.”

“We admired the distinctive voice and the commitment to scene-driven action, which makes the story feel alive and immediate on the page.”

“This is a strong standalone piece.”

“Fast-paced, punchy dialogue that is creative and realistically rendered, while being easy to follow as a reader.”

“Bram Forrester is well-drawn as a disturbed main character, and his voice is distinct and captivating.”

“Using Clausewitz as a character to personify and illustrate a deepening psychosis is clever and thrilling.”

“Bram is truly an antihero that makes us want to read more.”

“We did find much to admire in this submission.”

“The poetic writing and the suspense… make it easy to keep reading.”

“We recognize how much talent and skill went in to your submission.”

“We were pleased with your submission and hope we’ll see more of your work in the future.”

“Thank you for sharing your wonderful work with us.”

“Our judge… was thrilled to read such excellent work and found it very hard to decide among the work submitted.”